in a flourish forest, the mice of a gray and a grey-haired old person live in a soil cave below the foot of a hill, arrived in the winter, goose feather heavy snow fell outside the hole, hang on pine full snowflake, the mice beg grandfather of a manner of anxiety or happiness: grandpa “ , you let me go out to play a little while, a little while. ”“ good! grandpa ” say, mice skips 3 rule are high.
在一个茂盛的森林里，一只灰色的小老鼠和一名白发苍苍的老人住在山脚下的一个土洞里，到了冬天，洞外下起了鹅毛大雪，松树上挂满了雪花，抓耳挠腮的小老鼠央求爷爷：“爷爷，您就让我出去玩一会儿吧，就一会儿。”“那好吧！”爷爷说道，小老鼠一蹦三尺高。( 作文 www.zuowenba.net )
mice arrived outside, hit on snow ground boil, still was opposite together with the grandfather person of a light snow, at this moment, mice discovered a was frozen stiff snake, still thinking is a club, then it brings back the home to play, the temperature in house and outside disparate, the thaw in house, anguine come to come over, it awakes to attack like the grandfather, this but making a fire the grandfather that cook was frightened jump.
小老鼠到了外面，就在雪地上打起了滚，还和爷爷一起对了一个小雪人，这时，小老鼠发现了一条冻僵了的蛇，还以为是一根木棍，于是就吧它带回家玩，屋里的温度和外面截然不同，屋里暖和，蛇苏醒了过来，它一醒来就像爷爷扑过去，这可把正在生火做饭的爷爷吓了一跳。
great grandfather and mice ran out directly, the snake is chased after closely at the back do not abandon, at this moment, the snake bumps to lever of a pine, because had exerted oneself to do sth. fierce, bring about unconscious, at this moment, the grandfather's benevolence breaks out, taking a snake to looked for piggy doctor then, piggy doctor fears the snake awakes ate oneself, do not agree to be treated to the snake then, subsequently great grandfather looked for …… of feline doctor, pine doctor again everybody does not agree to be treated to the snake, be afraid that the snake awakes ate oneself.
老爷爷和小老鼠直接跑了出去，蛇在后面紧追不舍，这时，蛇撞到了一颗松树杆上，由于用力过猛，导致昏迷不醒，这时，爷爷的善心发作，于是就带着蛇去找了小猪医生，小猪医生害怕蛇醒来吃了自己，于是不肯给蛇治疗，随后老爷爷又找了猫医生、松树医生……大家都不肯给蛇治疗，都怕蛇醒来吃了自己。
great grandfather does not have method, was forced to bring back it soil cave, warm oneself to it everyday, to it the …… that drink drug spent a many month, the snake woke eventually, it found mice to say the thing that produce, at this moment, the grandfather just came back, the snake runs over to him immediately, coil grandfather say: “ my general will to be able to repay you certainly. ” said him to go.
老爷爷没办法，只好把它带回了土洞，每天给它取暖，给它喝药……过了一个多月，蛇终于醒了过来，它找到了小老鼠把发生的事情讲了一遍，这时，爷爷刚好回来了，蛇立马向他跑过去，卷住爷爷说道：“我将来一定会报答你的。”说完他就走了。
these a few years, the hunter's attack also had not sufferred again in this loose woods, and what great grandfather does not know is, this is the snake is repaying him.
这几年，这片松树林里再也没有受过猎人的攻击，而老爷爷不知道的是，这都是蛇在报答自己。
this story tells us: err thing is not terrible, terrible is you after err finishs sth, do not correct, must know a fault to change.
这个故事告诉我们：做错事情并不可怕，可怕的是你做错了事后不改正，一定要知错就改。(文/陈宣志)